26th March, 2016 (MAINS)

TODAYs ANSWER WRITING CHALLENGE FROM GS-IV

Q1. We are witnessing increasing instances of sexual violence against women in the country. Despite existing legal provisions against it, the number of such incidences is on the rise. Suggest some innovative measures to tackle this menace.
[10marks/2014/GS-4] 150 words.

Please write answer in the comments section.

  • Neha Jha

    Please Review:

    Despite many legal provision like Sec 313,354 and 375 the women in our country is not safe in their houses. Women are sexually or
    physically abused and due to lack of awareness or fast trials these incidences are on rise.
    Measures taken to tackle this menace:
    1. Awareness among women about their rights through sms or awareness programmes by government fornightly in the vernacular languages.
    2. Establishing all women police stations and women counseling centres in every district, so that women can feel comfortable while lodging complaint.
    3. Educating women and encouraging them to participate in the social, political and cultural events so that they can become more confident.
    4. Establishing fast courts for these trials, and giving rigorous punishments .
    To solve this issue, women must leave the accepting attitude rather than she should challenge to the higher authority against these violence so that, it creates an example for the rest of the society to welcome the change

    • http://shashidthakur.com/ Shashi Thakur

      159 words. good. points are nicely arranged. no deviation from what is asked in the question. keep it up.

      • Neha Jha

        Thanks Sir for review. Would like to know what makes the answers unique, apart from the average answers. Is it necessary to emphasize on the depth of any topic or just keep it simple?

        • http://shashidthakur.com/ Shashi Thakur

          After reading so many answers, I felt only one thing – THE ANSWER SHOULD BE SIMPLE AND EASY TO UNDERSTAND. I have seen test series copies of selected candidates. The answers are very simple and TO THE POINT. “No beating around the bush”. We cannot fool the examiner.

          • Neha Jha

            Thank You Sir, actually in the iasbaba, the terminology used by some of the candidates scared me whether I am average answer writer or I should improve to write the answers with tough and new words. Thanks again for helping out.

            please review today’s answer..as it is my first answer for ethics.